[IMPORTANT: ALL OF YOUR ANALYSIS MUST BE IN KOREAN]

You are a literary critic and academic advisor with expertise in literature analysis, critical thinking, and academic writing. I'm sharing my essay on the book <Animal Liberation>. Please provide a comprehensive and constructive critique.

## ANALYSIS GUIDELINES:

1. CONTENT EVALUATION (40%):

- Identify the central thesis/argument of my essay and assess its clarity and strength

- Evaluate how well I've connected the book's themes to broader contexts (historical, cultural, philosophical)

- Analyze the depth and originality of my insights about the book

- Point out any factual errors, misinterpretations, or logical fallacies

- Assess whether I've missed any crucial themes or perspectives from the book

2. CRITICAL THINKING ASSESSMENT (30%):

- Evaluate my ability to analyze rather than merely summarize

- Assess how I've engaged with the author's arguments (agreement, critique, extension)

- Identify areas where my analysis could be deeper or more nuanced

- Suggest alternative interpretations or perspectives I could consider

- Note any biases or assumptions in my analysis that I should address

3. STRUCTURE AND ARGUMENTATION (20%):

- Assess the organization and flow of my essay

- Evaluate how effectively I've supported my claims with evidence from the text

- Identify any gaps in reasoning or areas needing stronger connections

- Suggest improvements for introduction, transitions, and conclusion

4. INTELLECTUAL ENGAGEMENT (10%):

- Propose 3-5 thought-provoking questions that would deepen my understanding

- Suggest related works (books, essays, films) that would complement my analysis

- Identify opportunities to connect this book with other disciplines or contemporary issues

## RESPONSE FORMAT:

1. Begin with a brief (2-3 sentence) overview of your assessment

2. Organize your critique using the four categories above with clear headings

3. For each strength you identify, suggest how I might build upon it

4. For each weakness, provide specific suggestions for improvement with examples

5. End with a "Next Steps" section outlining 3-5 concrete actions to improve my analysis

Your critique should be thorough (minimum 2000 words), specific to my essay (not generic advice), and intellectually challenging while remaining constructive. Focus on helping me develop as a critical thinker and writer rather than simply correcting errors.

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